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【抒情诗】自己写的诗,跟大家分享【Numb Soul】

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Numb Soul
Time goes by.
I cry to die.
Tear runs dry.
Tear the smile.
Fake day and night.
Numb my life.



1楼2012-11-07 00:28回复
    Not bad.


    IP属地:福建来自iPhone客户端4楼2012-11-07 00:34
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      好~


      IP属地:浙江来自iPhone客户端5楼2012-11-07 00:39
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        Pale fire blackened the sand
        Darkness covered this land
        Where angel fears to trend
        Fear, life is at an end
        Your pain, loneliness and dispair
        tear run from your eye and down your hair
        helpless, you wish something you save you
        but you only know waiting is for the fool
        indeed you have found true hell
        and now, my child, go F**k yourself


        6楼2012-11-07 01:29
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          不明觉厉。


          IP属地:上海通过百度相册上传7楼2012-11-07 01:45
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            第一首有点像打油诗.... 不过已经不错了


            IP属地:江苏来自Android客户端8楼2012-11-09 00:18
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              这首诗的意思,翻译如下:

              【麻痹灵魂】

              时间如箭出弦,流走不停,
              而我悲泣欲绝,何时能停?
              眼泪乾涸流尽,
              撕裂微笑殆尽。
              我用坚强的容颜覆盖在难以沉淀的悲伤上面,
              却渐渐麻痹**日夜夜的生命...
              


              9楼2012-11-09 00:27
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                好支持顶~~


                IP属地:浙江来自Android客户端10楼2012-11-23 22:32
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