江城子
                        
                        感怀花梁
  
  时日入夜,读苏公妙词,致记梦一篇,忽有所感,念梁花之情,与此词颇多贴切,因略做改动,一者叹梁花之情,二也为怀苏公妙作,自叹不胜.
                     

                      十年生死两茫茫
                      不思量,自难忘
                   万里归来,无处话凄凉
                      若使相逢定厮守
                      尘满面,鬓如霜
                      夜来幽梦湖还乡
                      小儿郎,正开箱
                   相顾无言,惟有泪千行
                     料得年年肠断处
                     明月夜,向东方.