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Do you think kids today watch too much TV/ use too much screen time (use the computer)? sure.I believe children nowadays spend too much time on the screens.Because the pace of living in our current society is becoming rapider and rapider,the parents have less and less free time to take care of their children,so they have to leave their children alone in front of the screens.They think it's safer than leaving their children alone outdoors.


1楼2012-04-24 12:28回复
    @WISEME06
    能请你看下吗?如果不忙的话。语法和表达有什么不妥的吗?


    2楼2012-04-24 13:16
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      来自手机贴吧3楼2012-04-24 13:18
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        thank you.


        5楼2012-04-24 13:45
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          rapider and rapider-----more and more rapidly 形容词并列结构 以及动副结构
          because 和so 去掉一个,注意大小写 连词二选一
          leaving--- to leave 并列结构
          通篇比较口语化


          6楼2012-04-24 15:25
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            非常感谢。


            7楼2012-04-24 15:38
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