回复：120109◇【TC★作文】我自己写的英语作文，绝对原创

貌似有几个拼错了
最后一个词prograss是grogress

顶 支持

哦哦，手抖打错啦！
谢谢亲指点！

强烈的顶

能翻译下么……

第一段：你知道至上励合吗？第一个中国组合。有5个成员。张远，李茂，刘洲成，马雪阳，金恩圣

有一些语法貌似错了，不过好有才~！！！！呱唧呱唧~！

Zhang yuan is the captain of the band .He is very calm and smart.He has a great voice and all his songs are very wonderful. The small eyes are his style,and he can make many people fall in love with him.
张远是队长。他是冷静并且聪明的。他又很棒的声音并且他的歌是精彩的。小眼睛是他的风格，并且他能使很多人爱上他。

LL你好厉害

Li Mao is a very popular person .And he is a creative man,too.Not only can he sing,but also he can dance very well and specially.He is always hold some programs And often get some shouts.
李茂是个非常有影响力的人。他也是一个有创作力的男人。他不仅能跳舞而且舞跳得很特别。他经常能控制全场and呼喊。

英语盲能路过么

Ma Xueyang is a talented boy.He can write his own lyrics and offers them to his group. He also is a musician. He can play the vilion and others. His perform always makes people relaxed.And his simlelikes sun is very warm.
马雪阳是个有天赋的男孩。他能写自己的词曲并且贡献给团队。他也是个音乐家【我夸张啦，不过我相信雪阳的实力】他能拉小提琴和其他乐器。他的表演能是人们感到放松。他的笑容像阳光一样温暖。

Liu Zhoucheng is the most popular one.He has a pretty beautiful face likes flowers. Alough he can't be the most great one he still very hard.And he try to do better.Maybe because of his age,he sometimes a little wild.But he is confident all the time.
刘洲成是最受欢迎的之一。他有像花一样的脸蛋。尽管他不是最棒的，他仍然努力着。他尝试做得更好。也许他年龄小，他有时有点小鲁莽。但是他是自信的。

The five persons all very lovely.So they have thousands of fans.They can support them forever.Let's expect to see their progress.
他们很可爱，所以他们有成千上万的粉丝。他们【至天使】支持他们【tc】到永远.让我们期待他们的进步吧！