回复：★MinHo★‖1127求助‖英语演讲李民浩,亲，救命

。。 我语法不是强项

矮油，大家都是Minoz,干嘛那么客气啊

Today I want to share something about my favorite star with you.Have you ever watched a drama named City Hunter?So,do you konw who is my favorite star?Yes,it's Minho Lee,a Korean actor.In fact,he was just a model at the beginning.While,because of his outstanding appearance and stature,he was regarded as a protential artist. Although he was just acting as a supporting actor in the drama he treated it very seriously and played his part with great efforts. After years of hard-woking and perseverance,he succeeded.After taking the chief actor in the "Flower Boy" and the prevailing "City hunter", with his wonderful acting skill and continual efforts,now,he has become a famous actor in Korea, or rather, in Asia!The number of his fans has been increasing,while he treats his fans as his family members,which makes him more easygoing and considerate. From him I learn how to get along well with others and how to improve myself.In a word ,as far as I'm concerned,Minho Lee not only plays the role of star but also sets a good example for me on how to live a more meaningful life.That's all.Thank you!
本人水平有限，稍微修改了一下，看看有没有帮助，表示我已经几年没写过英文文章了，大大地落后了。


对，漏了，把hard-working 改为：hard work.用名词

亲，语言无法表达了。。。。


初二党的英语水平~~你懂得~~~

谢谢亲捏。。。

是滴，minoz让我觉得好温暖的说捏。。

Should be artist, not yet star. Not drama, use "episode". supporting "role", hard-working, spelt wrongly, easy-going, can be more popular among his fans

Thank you！！！！

楼楼sorry，本人初中还米有毕业，英语水平你懂的。。