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Topic:which do you think have more impact on our life,TV or telephone?
Telephone and television are both critial contrivance in the human history. Hardly can we imagine the situation without such significant inventions. Although they play indispensable roles in our daily life, they make disproportionate contributions to the society. From my perspective,telephones have occupy the majority proportion.
Most people are unanimous that telephone can bring people closer. In the past, when people had no phone, they communicated with others through writing letters, which would take more time to deliver or even be lost on the way to recipients. In this case, they would be denied the access to learn about what they were supposed to know. If the lost messages were very important to the addressee, the consequence might be severer than we considered. Nowadays, seldom do those things happen for the appearance of phone call. Whithout the benefits and conveniences that telephones have brought to us, the efficiency and accuracy of a message sending would collapse due to the lack of speed and reliability; Senders will be worried about whether their letters have arrive to recipients since they have no idea to make it sure; Addressees cannot write back immediately. Specifically, there will be come up numerous problems on condition that the phone disappear abruptly.
From another aspect, the contributions of the television also cannot be ignored. Many people consider it as an indispensable entertainment in daily life, and many people treat it as a media contact to outside information. But in fact, entertainments are only the spices in our life, even though enjoyment is appealing to everyone, it never can be a substitution for a practical invention which bring us many indispensable functions such as telephone. Without television doesn’t mean we can’t have a high-standard life. We can go travelling, enjoy a delicate meal, read sensible books and so forth. For instance, my uncle hardly watches TV and he only prefers to read books, newspapers, or magazines. In addition, excessive relaxations would result in people’s indolence. Students may get a lower score if they watch TV frequently; Employees maybe finish works in a slack attitude if they always think of plots in the teleplays. Therefore, comparing to the television, the more advantages and less disadvantages of the telephone is obviously visible.
Last but not least, telephones boost social economy directly. Costomers can purchase products by phone in a rapid way. More immediate means more convient; More convenience for customers means more profit to companys. Hence the ever-increasing growth of economy is supposed to give a part of credits to telephones. To some extent, mordern economy cannot exist without telephones.
In general, telephones come to our rescue in the condition of communicating from a distance and slow growth of economy and so on. Taking it in deliberate account that which is more indispensable when it comes to telephone and television; Maybe one would be confused about it, but after analysises above, the answer will be clearly decided.



1楼2011-10-12 22:08回复
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    2楼2011-10-12 22:13
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      3楼2011-10-12 22:15
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        4楼2011-10-12 22:16
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          5楼2011-10-12 22:17
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            Topic:WHAT'S YOUR OPINION ON ?
            Telephone and television are both critial[IMPORTANT] contrivance[-S] in HUMAN history. Hardly can we imagine the situation without such significant inventi[DEVICES]. Although they play indispensable roles in our daily life, they make disproportionate contributions to the society. From my perspective,telephone[S,NO] have[HAS] occupy[IED] the majority proportion.
            Most people [AGREED] that telephone can bring people closer. LONG AGO, when people had no phone, they communicated with others throu[BY] writing letters[MAIL], which TOOK more time to deliver or even [WOULD]be lost on the way to recipients. In this case, they would be denied the[NOT THE] access to [TRACKING]. If the lost messages were very important to the addressee, the consequence might be [JUST UNIMAGINABLE]. Nowadays, seldom do those things happen [THANKS TO THE IMPROVEMENT of phone SERVICE . Whithout the benefits and convenience[s-NO] that MODERN telephones have brought to us, the -[SENDING] and accuracy of a message would HAVE BEEN JAMMED due to the[NO THE] lack of speed and reliability; Senders will be-[COULD STILL BE HARD TO LOCATE [原文啰嗦]; Addressees MIGHT not write[BE WRITTEN] back immediately. Specifically, there COULD [NO BE] come up [WITH , A MUST]numerous problems on condition that the phone disappearED abruptly.[I DONT WHAT YOUSRE TALKING ABOUT SEVERAL LINES ABOVE.]
            From another aspect, the contribution[NO s] of the television also cannot be ignored. Many people consider it as an indispensable entertainment in daily life, and many people[P-多余] treat it as a media co-[OUTLET] -[FOR] information. But in fact, entertainments are only the spices in our life, even though enjoyment is NOT appealing to everyone, it never can be a substitution for a practical invention which bring[HAS BROUGHT] us many indispensable functions such as telephone. Without television [I DON'T]-doesn’t mean we can’t have a high-standard life. We can[COULD] go travelling, enjoy a delicate meal, read sensible books and MORE. For instance[啰嗦], My uncle hardly watches TV[TELIVISION-一致] and he only prefers to read books, newspapers, or magazines. In addition, excessive relaxation[S-NO] would result in people-[P -CHINGLISH’s] indolence. Students MIGHT get lower scoreS if they watch TV frequently; Employees maybe [TALK--最简单最易用的不用] in a slack attitude【monday morning mode用这个加分,对国外文化了解】 if they always think of plots in the teleplays. Therefore, comparing to[]CONPARED WITH] the television, the more advantages and less[FEWER] disadvantages of the telephone is obviously visible.
            Last but not least, telephones boost social economy directly. Costomers can purchase products by phone in a rapid way. More immediate means more convient[SPELLING]; More convenience for customers means more profit to[FOR] companys[-IES]. Hence the ever-increasing growth of economy is supposed to give a[NO-A] part of credits[NO S] to telephones. To some extent, mordern economy cannot exist without CHEAP AND EFFICIENT telephones.
            In general, telephones come to our rescue in[UNDER] the condition[NORE CON,USE CIRCUMSTANCES] of DIFFICULT communicatION from a distance and slow growth of economy and so on. Takin[TALKING ABOUT] it in deliberate account that which is more indispensable when it comes to telephone VERSUS television; Maybe[MAY MORE TNAN SANDS,WHY NOT pROBABLY] one would be MORE confused , but after analysises above, the answer will be clearly decided.
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            6楼2011-10-12 23:13
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