[adele]如果把SLY的歌词翻成这样会不会太平凡了点。。

褒贬含糊不清。。

我觉得还不如呢。。
反而矫情，假，故作姿态。。陈词滥调。。没有感情，假大空
生活中谁那么说啊。。
原文多像现实的感觉。。

喏。我的版本：
愿郎如你
吾有所闻兮，君定其心；
佳人入抱兮，成家完婚。
吾有所闻兮，君梦成真；
料依助你兮，我所不能。
何必羞怯兮，敢问老友？
欺瞒退缩兮，君之未有。
不请自来兮，非我所愿；
不能逃避兮，不可阻挡。
当君见我兮，或能明了：
不能释怀兮，我心扰扰。
愿君宽慰兮，愿郎如你；
谨致祝福兮，便无它意。
乞勿忘我兮，曾记尔言：
爱能长久兮，亦能伤人。
爱能长久兮，亦能伤人，呜呼。
流光飞逝兮，君当知晓；
牵手与共兮，宛如昨日。
长大成人兮，穿越迷茫；
惊喜充盈兮，时光美妙。
不请自来兮，非我所愿；
不能逃避兮，不可阻挡。
当君见我兮，或能明了：
不能释怀兮，我心扰扰。
愿君宽慰兮，愿郎如你；
谨致祝福兮，便无它意。
乞勿忘我兮，曾记尔言：
爱能长久兮，亦能伤人。
无与伦比兮，无忧无虑；
悔恨过错兮，迄不可追。
悲欣交集兮，谁解其味？
愿君宽慰兮，愿郎如你；
谨致祝福兮，便无它意。
乞勿忘我兮，曾记尔言：
爱能长久兮，亦能伤人。
愿君宽慰兮，愿郎如你；
谨致祝福兮，便无它意。
乞勿忘我兮，曾记尔言：
爱能长久兮，亦能伤人。
爱能长久兮，亦能伤人。呜呼。噫吁呼。

正经的版本是这样的：
I heard, that your settled down.
听说，你定了下来，
That you, found a girl and your married now.
找个女孩，结了婚。
I heard that your dreams came true.
听说，你梦想成真，
Guess she gave you things, I didn't give to you.
想必她能给你我做不到的。 Old friend, why are you so shy?
老朋友，你为何如此胆怯？
It ain't like you to hold back or hide from the lie.
你可不是会退缩和欺瞒的人。 I hate to turn up out of the blue uninvited.
很遗憾我不请自来，
But I couldn't stay away, I couldn't fight it.
但我逃不开，忍不住。
I'd hoped you'd see my face & that you'd be reminded,
我希望你看到我的样子。你会明白
That for me, it isn't over.
对我来说，这并不是结束。 Nevermind, I'll find someone like you.
别介意，我会找个像你一样的人。
I wish nothing but the best, for you too.
对你，我只能致以最好的祝福。
Don't forget me, I beg, I remember you said:-
不要忘记我，我恳求你。记得你曾说：
Sometimes it lasts in love but sometimes it hurts instead.
有时候爱能恒久，有时候却很伤人。
Sometimes it lasts in love but sometimes it hurts instead, yeah.
有时候爱能恒久，有时候却很伤人。唉。 You'd know, how the time flies.
你看，时光飞逝的多快，
Only yesterday, was the time of our lives.
就在昨天，我们还牵手与共。
We were born and raised in a summery haze.
我们从夏日的薄雾中走来，
Bound by the surprise of our glory days.
充盈着那些美好时光的惊喜。 I hate to turn up out of the blue uninvited.
很遗憾我不请自来，
But I couldn't stay away, I couldn't fight it.
但我逃不开，忍不住。
I'd hoped you'd see my face & that you'd be reminded,
我希望你看到我的样子。你会明白
That for me, it isn't over.
对我来说，这并不是结束。 Nevermind, I'll find someone like you.
别介意，我会找个像你一样的人。
I wish nothing but the best, for you too.
对你，我只能致以最好的祝福。
Don't forget me, I beg, I remember you said:-
不要忘记我，我恳求你。记得你曾说：
Sometimes it lasts in love but sometimes it hurts instead.
有时候爱能恒久，有时候却很伤人。 Nothing compares, no worries or cares.
无与伦比，没有忧伤或烦恼。
Regret's and mistakes they're memories made.
回忆起来却是悔恨和误解。
Who would have known how bittersweet this would taste?
谁能懂得这苦乐参半的味道？ Nevermind, I'll find someone like you.
别介意，我会找个像你一样的人。
I wish nothing but the best, for you too.
对你，我只能致以最好的祝福。
Don't forget me, I beg, I remember you said:-
不要忘记我，我恳求你。记得你曾说：
Sometimes it lasts in love but sometimes it hurts instead.
有时候爱能恒久，有时候却很伤人。 Nevermind, I'll find someone like you.
别介意，我会找个像你一样的人。
I wish nothing but the best, for you too.
对你，我只能致以最好的祝福。
Don't forget me, I beg, I remember you said:-
不要忘记我，我恳求你。记得你曾说：
Sometimes it lasts in love but sometimes it hurts instead.
有时候爱能恒久，有时候却很伤人。
Sometimes it lasts in love but sometimes it hurts instead, yay yeh yeah.
有时候爱能恒久，有时候却很伤人。唉，唉，唉。

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