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Sand, lies in the most south of Shenzhen is our turbulence three-hour-drive’s destination. Perhaps, this is my most memorable journey in my all life. Because this is my first time that I go out with junior middle school students instead of my closely associated family and I really had a meaningful time.
During the day we swam in the blistering sun, but for me, the night may be more charming. The sand in the night, a gift from God, where waved can be seen budging slowly in the breeze and swallowing rippled ahead. The sea wind was very comfortable and the sea water was cool and refreshing .So I took off my shoes to walk in the sea. I felt fantastic when I touched the flexible sand and the refreshing sea water with my bare feet .The magic feeling is beyond expression.
Another wonderful thing was that I played fireworks with my best friends in the sand. The all dark beach laced with blazing with color fireworks. We circled while we held the fireworks in our hands. It seems that a bright moon can rotation dropped in the peaceful beach. Then we laid the beach, watching the starry sky. The night sky was bespangled with twinkling stars. We talked and exchanged something personal each other in such a situation. We talked about our own childhoods, our own family and some interesting things. I remember that I thought of a song by Zhang Huimei that time called <<Tinghai>>.We sang that song while we were walking along the sea hand in hand under the beautiful moon. Suddenly a sentence says” God made relatives; Thank God we can choose our friends” flashing into my mind.
She is my friend forever although we don’t study in the same school now. In my firmly believe from beginning to end, without a friend the world is a wilderness.
Thank this trip. Thank my friend.
怎么增加一些环境和感情的描写
啥，要求是突出友谊的美好
During the day we swam in the blistering sun, but for me, the night may be more charming. The sand in the night, a gift from God, where waved can be seen budging slowly in the breeze and swallowing rippled ahead. The sea wind was very comfortable and the sea water was cool and refreshing .So I took off my shoes to walk in the sea. I felt fantastic when I touched the flexible sand and the refreshing sea water with my bare feet .The magic feeling is beyond expression.
Another wonderful thing was that I played fireworks with my best friends in the sand. The all dark beach laced with blazing with color fireworks. We circled while we held the fireworks in our hands. It seems that a bright moon can rotation dropped in the peaceful beach. Then we laid the beach, watching the starry sky. The night sky was bespangled with twinkling stars. We talked and exchanged something personal each other in such a situation. We talked about our own childhoods, our own family and some interesting things. I remember that I thought of a song by Zhang Huimei that time called <<Tinghai>>.We sang that song while we were walking along the sea hand in hand under the beautiful moon. Suddenly a sentence says” God made relatives; Thank God we can choose our friends” flashing into my mind.
She is my friend forever although we don’t study in the same school now. In my firmly believe from beginning to end, without a friend the world is a wilderness.
Thank this trip. Thank my friend.
怎么增加一些环境和感情的描写
啥，要求是突出友谊的美好
10楼是好人 病句一堆。你不是从翻译器里复制过来的吧。第一句，SAND是地名吗，怎么感觉你是想说沙滩。如果是地名最好这样写Sand lying in the south ……is our destination ,另外turbulence一看就是名词，麻烦用形容词。
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