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嗯,,, 如题..
小的其实经常把图放在DA丫~~
於是~ 今天收到一份生日礼~ 虽然不完整,,但很感动..>////<,,
是之前一直在画的故事..(也是不完整的=A=)
只有片段什麼的给大家看,, 可有友人居然开始帮小的作出来了...!!(感动)
不过是英文=W=..(因是外国友人嘛..)
希望大家会喜欢吧~~
次序什麼的,,,他好像弄错了~ 不过也不要紧,,WWW
他的故事的次序是正确的>/////<b
有机会再补一下图给他=d!!!哈哈!!
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First Chapter
The elder son of king was arrogant. He was also cruel as beautiful, and nobody dared to challenge him, because he was very powerful.
One day, a strolling players went to the capital. It consisted of several artists and strange creatures. A mysterious magician with blue hair as at night managed it.
Intrigued, trying to avoid his boredom, the prince, which was called Rasiel, invited the entertainers in his castle and their ordered to amuse him, as well as his court.
The show took place without problem. The public laughed and applauded, but the future monarch profoundly seemed to be bored.
It is then that the illusionist came on stage.
" I name Mukuro Rokudo, and this evening, I am going to present you my quite new creation. Something unpublished which will delight your eyes and will make capsize your hearts. "
He shook his cape covered with cabalistic signs, and a box appeared below.
It was made in an unknown, black and brilliant material.
The magician looked intensely
- Sir, please approach, I ask you !
Grudgingly, prince Rasiel joined Mukuro Rokudo on the platform. This one indicated her the handle allowing to open the box.
lThe blond put the hand above and pulled.
Inside, there was a doll.
The prince grimaced but detailed it more attentively.
She had the so white skin as we would have said about some chinese porcelain. Her hair were of a strange green. She had the closed eyelids.
- What this?, asked Rasiel, dissatisfied.
Suddenly, the doll opened eyes.
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1楼2011-06-16 12:34回复
    看不懂吗?? 要不到翻译网看看??
    因为这故事...其实小的挺喜欢;3~ 虽然还未完整~
    哈哈..其实,,,小的生日是15号...
    不要紧~ 反正没太多人记得=D~


    3楼2011-06-16 13:29
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      第一章
      大儿子是王自大的人。他也是残酷,没有美丽敢于挑战他,因为他很强大。
      一天,一个球员去漫步首都。它包含了几个艺术家和稀奇古怪的动物。一个神秘的魔术师和蓝头发黑夜还是成功了。
      感兴趣,尽量避免他的无聊,王子,叫做Rasiel,聘请艺人在他的城堡和他们的命令来取悦他以及他的法院。
      这个节目发生没有问题。公众的赞扬,但笑,未来似乎是君主深刻的无聊。
      这是那魔术师来到舞台上。
      “我的名字Mukuro Rokudo,今天晚上,我要为你引见我相当新造的人。这将让你发表的东西会使翻眼睛,你们的心。“
      他摇了摇他的斗篷覆盖着卡巴拉符号,和一盒出现如下。
      这是在一个未知的、黑色和辉煌的材料。
      魔术师看起来强烈
      方法-先生,请,我找你!
      Rasiel加入Mukuro勉强,王子Rokudo站台上。这一个表明手柄可以打开这个盒子。
      白肤金发碧眼的用手以上刚性较小里拉出来。
      在里面,有一个洋娃娃。
      王子,但详细的样子更讲课。
      她的皮肤很白,我们会说一些关于中国瓷器。她的头发是一种奇怪的绿色。她闭上眼皮。
      这个东西吗? - - - - - - - Rasiel问,不满意。
      突然,娃娃的眼睛。
      .......看不懂呢.......
      什么意思??【小A求翻译】
      


      4楼2011-06-16 21:41
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        嗯..有点奇怪的翻译=w=|||
        嘛~不过大约意思还是看得见的吧~~?
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        故事的开始,, 是讲述有一个王国~ Rasiel(就是王子的双胞胎兄长)是那王国的长子~
        [应该知道的吧..长子将成为皇帝..]
        他为人傲慢自大,,也很残忍,, 所以在这王国中..没人会敢得罪他的..
        而有一天~ R命令全国要举行一个盛会~ 目的当然是要取悦他~ 寻开心~
        而举行的当天~ 城里来了一班奇怪的人,, 以一位神秘而带有一头蓝头发的魔术师为首,,带著几位(只?)奇怪的人物与动物进城~
        在盛会中,, 每一个人也被精彩的表演所吸引而感到喜悦与赞叹~
        R却对一切也感到没动於衷,, (就是觉得无趣),,
        突然~那位魔术师上台~并说~
        “我的名字Mukuro Rokudo(六道骸),今晚,我要为你引见我新创造的人[指小F]。
        这东西将会使你翻眼睛[另开眼界],夺取你们的心(这句会明白的吧?=W=?总之是令大家都喜欢的意思)。“
        於是~ 魔术师摇动了自己的斗篷~便出现了一个奇怪的现象~
        有一个黑色的箱出现了~
        黑箱子是用一种神秘而看似高级的材料所制 (嗯..这个是友人加的XD")
        魔术师很认真地邀请R上前~ 把箱子打开(不打对白了=3=")
        R便勉为其难地上台~ 用手柄把箱子的门打开~
        在眼前~出现了一个洋娃娃(就是小F了WWWW)
        他的皮肤很白~ 有点像中国的瓷器娃娃~ (嗯..也是他形容的=A=..)
        头发是奇异的绿色
        双眼是闭上的..
        这是什麼? R不满意地问..
        突然..娃娃张开眼睛....
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        这是友人所作的第一篇-W-.. 嘛~ 这篇很多是他自己加的..(因小的故事很不完整地给他了XD!!!)
        应该会比较懂一点吧??
        


        5楼2011-06-16 22:12
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          诶诶原来是这样呢
          谢谢小A的翻译~~


          6楼2011-06-18 20:35
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            噗... 不用谢啦~
            本来...这故事就应该小的写出来的...=A=..
            要不是文笔差..(掩脸)


            7楼2011-06-19 00:06
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              0v0 小A我比较想看画出来的XDDD


              8楼2011-06-19 11:41
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                噗... 小的只会画一格格啦~~
                有机会多画点才开始放,,,
                因为本来只是画了一两张...
                还是中段部份-A-...."
                是跟友人一同想著想著,,,,之后想出来的WWW


                9楼2011-06-19 16:49
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                  Second chapter
                  The doll was beautiful as an angel. Prince Rasiel liked her, and adopted her at once. He called him Fran.
                  He made her make princesses' dresses, covered her jewels. He slept with her, he did her hair, dressed her. He took care of her.
                  But she had a defect, a terrible defect which the son of the monarch couldn't support.
                  She was dumb.
                  Rasiel tried all the stratagems. He caressed her, cherished her. He also threatened it. But she didn't speak. She seemed indifferent to everything, and nothing of it he made didn't appear to touch her really. And she never smiled.
                  Deprived, the prince eventually leaves her in a corner, and as time goes by, she is forgotten.
                  The dust accumulated above, tarnishing the brightness of the cheeks and her hair.
                  Nevertheless, the doll had a heart. She felt feelings, but did not show them. And when the prince abandoned her, she felt very alone.
                  She resigned herself and waited. Years passed …
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                  10楼2011-06-20 02:10
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                    这次很短..(掩脸)..
                    不过还是感到,,>/////<很感动....
                    於是~ 翻译一下吧~
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                    那洋娃娃真的很美~ 还天使一样..
                    R很喜欢他~ (为啥都改成了HER=田=,, 小F是男丫!! 虽然小的在这故事设定是没性别..)
                    所以马上地收养(要了)他,, 并取名为FRAN(弗兰)
                    R为他制了公主服~ 满身宝石~ 跟他睡~(噗)摸他的头发~用心地照顾著他~
                    但F有著一个缺陷~是R没办法接受的..
                    是他并不懂说话...
                    R用尽了各种方法~ 爱抚他~珍惜他~ 也没办法让F说话~
                    虽然R对他比任何东西都不一样..更不让任何人触摸他..但他从不会微笑..
                    於是..R开始对他产生厌倦了..把他摆放在一旁,,,
                    尘土开始覆盖著他的身体每一个部份...
                    不过,,F还是有心的...他是有感情的...可只是不懂得怎样表露出来而已...
                    所以,,当R选择不理会他的时侯..他感到非常的寂寞,,
                    他开始不断说服自己并用心等待著...
                    然后日复日....
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                    就...差不多这样;3


                    11楼2011-06-20 02:26
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                      很萌的故事丫><全部看懂鸟=WW=


                      12楼2011-07-07 20:35
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                        好吧,,,, 小的有多久没来自己的吧了...
                        看到远久的留言了,,,,
                        话说...那篇小说... 其实还有一篇的,,, 但似乎都变得不像小的想的方向=A=...
                        又,,, 忘了放在那什麼的... 所以说..自己想下续吧;3 ((踢


                        13楼2011-11-27 21:04
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                          Third chapter (and end)
                          A grating eventually rung in the attic. The doll opened eyes, surprised. Because of cobwebs, she lives only a silhouette with the fair hair. There was something brilliant on the head, as a crown, then, suddenly, Fran's heart began beating more hardly. It was prince Rasiel, it had meant looking for her. He had understood that his error had been to consider her as an object, and not as a person.
                          Because what wanted Fran, it was to be loved. As a human being.
                          - Ushishishi, here she is. The famous doll of my brother …
                          It wasn't Rasiel. But he had the same face, the same smile.
                          He put his hands down on Fran with the same greediness.
                          His hair were shorter and ruffled.
                          - We would say a wild one, noticed the doll of a neutral voice.
                          - Shut up !, scolded the twin brother. My name is Belphegor. But you can call me Prince the ripper. And I would be future king of this country !
                          In these words, his(her,its) smile widens. And Fran smiles.
                          - An interim prince.

                          Rasiel drank a cup of tea. The handmaid fixed him.
                          - Why you look at me like that ?, he grumbled. You don't better have to make ?
                          The handmaid recovered and sent hima wide smile. It is then that it her was recognized, and his heart stopped beating.
                          - I exist only to serve you, my Lord. Until your death do us part.
                          - You...speak ?, whispered Rasiel by collapsing.
                          The tea spread on the ground.
                          - Ushishishi, good night sweety prince, declared Bel by taking out back a curtain.
                          The doll came to snuggle up to its trunk, and he caressed friendly her head.
                          - You want to become my queen ?, asked the heir of the throne.
                          - Never, rather to die, mumbled Fran, her) voice suppressed against the shirt of the blond.
                          - Ushishishi. Indeed, I am going to call maids, so that they clean that.
                          He indicated the corpse of his brother.

                          And they lived (more or less ) happy (between two murders)
                          THE END


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