求高手一助

I have a piece of good news and one of bad news , which one do you listen first?

news不可数名词，不能直接加冠词。

listen后面敢不敢加个to

感谢各位

do也很别扭
which one will you listen to first

I have a good news and a bed news , which one do you want first?

I have a piece of good news and one of bad news , which one will you listen to first?

prefer to

news不需要a，直接have good news就可以。除此以外，some good news, a piece of good news都行。
用listen太直译了，用know就行了。which one would you like to know first?

还有个问题楼都没注意么？是bad 不是bed （床）

listen 要加to，但listen to是欣赏过程，这里的新闻是想收到脑子里去，并不享受听的过程，所以要hear
whcih one do you hear first? 又不对，要加want，
原因嘛，不说了，打字太累，楼主还是学多点营造点语感吧。

bad, 但估计是 auto correct