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写篇汉字的 去百度一翻译。。。。

汉语的也行 求成品- -

Today , i want to introduce my idol who is the greatest shooter in the NBA history-----Ray allen 我只是开个头而已 楼主什么需要?

have you ever heard of ray allen？he's one of best SG in nba。he's a clam and modest。it's hard to find this kind of player in NBA now。he's a three-point shooter。healways cause the most deadly strike at the hard time of a game。although he's a great player，it's difficult to find he get annoyed with others。so we all give him a nickname“gentleman ray ”


he is good at shoot,if you the team need a three point ball in the end ,pass the ball to him,he wouldn't let you down.And he is a real gentleman,never say bullshit to his enemies.He won the champion in the 2008 with boston . 这样成不?

六楼的也不错。

回复：7楼
句子没有联系性，语法也有很多问题……比较突兀

我高三而已 哈哈哈

回复：10楼
初三毫无压力

哈哈 初三写成这样很好了 词汇量很多 楼主要的是别人能看懂 所以 单句多点比较好 我的连续性不好 但是语法没多少错误 你的就不一样了