帮我看一下这里有没有语法错误,是要寄到香港大学去的哦~~~
Hear the University of Hong Kong recruit students for the first time, the first mind fo me was to see my favorite Hong Kong entertainer.When I thought it absolutely ,just discovering study in Hong Kong university is raelly suit me,in this international metropolis with chinese and westward culture, i can run into the prople come from many countries .the study life of Hong Kong university is also differs from the hinterland.i believe that will urge me grow further ,and get ready for go abroad the advanced study even my life road in hereafter,finally make contribution for the development of the nation.But another reason is that i want to change the prejudice exists in certain Hong Kong to our inlander.I'd like to let them know than we are all chinese.Everybody should devote ourselves to the development of our motherland.
Hear the University of Hong Kong recruit students for the first time, the first mind fo me was to see my favorite Hong Kong entertainer.When I thought it absolutely ,just discovering study in Hong Kong university is raelly suit me,in this international metropolis with chinese and westward culture, i can run into the prople come from many countries .the study life of Hong Kong university is also differs from the hinterland.i believe that will urge me grow further ,and get ready for go abroad the advanced study even my life road in hereafter,finally make contribution for the development of the nation.But another reason is that i want to change the prejudice exists in certain Hong Kong to our inlander.I'd like to let them know than we are all chinese.Everybody should devote ourselves to the development of our motherland.
